Thread:Hallowseve97/@comment-2111068-20121224191847

I appreciate your revamps, however I want to ask you about something to make sure I understand what you're doing. I'm looking at your Black Baron revamp, and the first part is the biography and background of the character, which is usual, but then it unnaturally shifts to present tense, where it starts to act like a walkthrough. I don't mind it, but I'd prefer that it be one tense; either describe in the past tense, where it goes through the events; or describe in the present tense, where it acts like a walkthrough. I'd prefer the latter, but I want to hear your side also. 