Talk:Murray

Biography
Does anyone else think Murray's biography might be too detailed? Specifically the section about Thieves in Time...it's like a summary of every single job and event, even if those don't involve Murray that much. It's really long. I'd hate to delete other people's work, but I think the section could use some trimming down. Additionally, I think the Sly 3 section in contrast could be a just a little more detailed. The other parts of the bio (Early life, Sly 1, Sly 2, comics) seem good though. Listerine antiseptic (talk) 16:50, 16 April 2021 (UTC)


 * You're absolutely right, it is too detailed. Character articles need to focus mostly on the character and must not include so many unimportant details. If necessary, I will try to explain this to the user who made those edits. Quite a few character articles have that issue currently but will be redone eventually. Of course, you are welcome to assist RB1196 (talk) 18:23, 16 April 2021 (UTC)